Draft 1 of final production

 

In this first draft I've recognised a few issues one being the amount of drone footage I've used needs to be cut back and replaced with more footage relevant to what I'm talking about, so I need some footage of farm animals and manure as well as crops. More infographics will be useful for keeping the audiences attention as well. I need to replace the music because it's too generic. I also need a way to display my facts more. I also need to cut the end part that has special thanks I need to continue it so it looks like an extract and not a short documentary. I need to cut back on the amount of information I'm feeding my audience and give them more of an entertaining form of documentary.